You can’t hide in that yellow tree.
This entry was posted on August 30, 2011. It was filed under American, haiku, humor, poem, poems, poetry, spirituality, Stansberger .
Love this. The short lines mimic the act of spitting! And I love the repetition of certain words. Great rhythm, too.
August 31, 2011 at 9:06 pm
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Love this. The short lines mimic the act of spitting! And I love the repetition of certain words. Great rhythm, too.
August 31, 2011 at 9:06 pm